nice style,

i like the R most, even if i can't see how u manage the R down left.
and in my opinion the E is too thick, some thin lines, like us used it in your R. it speeds the letters up a little.
maybe thats why i like the R, cuz of this "thinner arm"

bad to explain with my english skills.

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Yeah some work needed....

That C without the top hook could make a cool L.
The Y is cool, though here it needs a little space on the bottom to show how it ends.
The P I like very much, as in alot.
The H Ok one of the bars the right vertical could be more straight, the two vertical bars curving out doesn't help the flow of it, maybe of the crossbar come from one of the vertical bars as a hook.
The E is nice though for this word shorten that bottom bar set to give a little room to the next letter, which brings us to the R....
The R not your best, In fact you should look back to your P which was flying, model the R after the P just add the bottom right part, and bam you got a more solid piece.

But that's just my look at it..... Glad to see you putting work up again.

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man, deep critique bro. haha, i'll take those into consideration if i choose to redo this joint.

nice piece that "E" is kool... and the R i didnt get it at first but when you look at it properly you can see it...... lol its a kool piece.. Keep it up! AND IF ANYONE VISITS MY PAGE ((comments and advice apresiated
NICE WORK!!

oh no your english is just fine yo. i understand what you're saying. i'll keep those things in mind next time i try to use the same letters/style as i did in this piece. thanks!

your right only the y and the E are dope...
altough the Y isnt that, but u need to sketcht more
oh yeah, shall we do ever blazing apart?
shall i do ever? i already have that sketch!
im reallydrunk

yeah aight. i'll get back to you in a week with the 'blazin' part of the collab yo. i haven't been drawing for weeks. been busy workin and trying to register at the last minute for some university courses.

hmm thanks !~

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